New track ... need some feedback.

[Volt9]

Hello peeps,

I'm new over here so hello to you all :) Great to find a not polluted forum with tech-heads ... hope to learn much from you! And will try to contribute some knowledge where needed :)

It's hard to get good feedback In my environment. So hoping to get some over here. I tried to post a soundcloud player but somehow I'm doing something wrong. Must be something simple ... if someone knows please tell me ... thx!


So down here I give you the link of my soundcloud page Its the first track called "Volt9 And Kincaid - Schoon Genoeg"
http://soundcloud.com/volt9


This is a dutch link but better quality then soundcloud player. Its the first/top track in the player called "Volt9 And Kincaid - Schoon Genoeg"
http://volt9.hyves.nl/


I think the track is finished for the biggest part. But I need some fresh ears to judge ... please tell me what you think! Positive/negative tell me what you will have done different. Tell me what stands out or not. I want to try to pull this one to a next level :rolleyes:

Thank you for your time and effort!
Glenn

[Volt9]

I'm wondering ... Is my thread in the wrong place:confused:

:):):)
Glenn