New Track- feedback please!

[River]

Last weekend 2 guys I used to run a night with came down for the weekend, and with lots of beer and take away this track was born. Since then I've finished it up, and its now ready to be heard!

Any comments welcome :)

http://soundcloud.com/theriver/disconcertion-drive1

If anyone wants to play it out PM for a .wav/high quality mp3 :D

[dramirez]

hay river

thank for uploading the track for us to listen to -

here are some thoughts i had, hopefully they will be helpful to you.

i like the energy and the drive / i like the off key stabs and weird noises you have put in there.

i did feel it sat somewhere between a soulwax and trentemoller production and it felt to me that it lacked a bit of identity.

maybe you could work on the bass line a bit - either making it sound harder or toning it down a bit to fit the track better. i felt the sound could have been a little better.

overall though i felt the track was pretty solid - keep up the great work.

d. ramirez

[River]

Cheers :)

Some helpful feedback there!

[tomflynn]

It's not something i would play myself dude but well done, keep it up, keep learning. I liked the french vocal, ohh la la moisour!

[River]

It's not something i would play myself dude but well done, keep it up, keep learning. I liked the french vocal, ohh la la moisour!

Yeah its a mint vocal, I have no idea what she's actually saying though :D!

[tomflynn]

Where did you get that vocal from?